She Makes Me Wanna Edit i made

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Characters and Whos with who in the new story.. She Makes Me Wanna..

From JLS...
 Aston...Marina
 JB....??
 Reesh...Samantha
 Marv..??
From The Wanted..
Tom..Hannah
Siva...Keshani
From One Direction..
Zayn...Alizar
Others:
Chris Brown..Anna

She Makes Me Wanna..

MY POV:

Chapter 1:

“Marina, come on we’re going to be late,” I heard Aston yell up the stairs. “Coming,” I yelled down. I finished brushing my hair and ran down the stairs. Aston put our bags in his car and we were on our way to the airport. “Whoooo!!!!! Ready for vacation bruv?” Marvin asked shaking hands with Aston. Everyone else was already there waiting for us. “ Finally, we’ve been waiting forever,” I heard Tom say. “At least they’re here now,” Keshani said standing with Siva. Ortise, Siva, Tom, JB, Marvin, Zayn, Chris, Anna, Samantha, Alizar, Hannah, me and Aston all boarded the plane to our summer vacation beach house. This was going to be an amazing summer.

Chapter 2:
“Babe, come on get up,” I heard Aston say. I looked up from his shoulder. “We’re here,” I heard Keshani say behind me. I opened my eyes and saw the LA skyline. “Wow, its beautiful,”  I said as Aston grabbed my hand. “I’m excited Tom,” Hannah said across from us. “I know babe, its going to be a epic summer,” he replied smiling at her. “Better than epic aye Tom,” Zayn said in front of us. “Yeah,” Chris yelled across the other side sitting next to Anna.

Chapter 3:

Our plane landed and we all got off and into taxis to our house. One for each girl and guy and Marvin and JB were going to share. We all went into our own separate rooms unpacking getting ready. “Babe, I cant believe we’re in LA for the summer In our own beach house. Im so excited!” Aston said picking me up twirling me round. “Yeah. Its going to be awesome,” I replied laughing as he put me down. “Love you babe,” he said coming over to me kissing me walking into the bathroom to shower. “Love you too Ast,” I said as he walked away getting clothes out. I went out into the living room waiting for Ast to finish. There was only 3 bathrooms. I passed Siva and Keshani’s room.

Keshani’s POV:

Chapter 4:

“Are you happy we came here Kesh?” Siva asked me sitting on the bed. “Yeah, it’s amazing here. I’m glad you brought me,” I replied opening the window letting the breeze flow into the room. The house was loud with laughs, screams, and everyone running around getting ready. “Me too, I wouldn’t go anywhere without ya,” he got up and came over to me. I felt his arms go around me from behind, his lips go on my neck. “I love you Keshani.” I smiled, “I love you too Siva.” “You better, I know where you live I’ll come to your house.” He laughed. “I don’t think I would mind that,” I said turning around to face him. He picked me up and carried me into the living room. Everyone was sitting around in there except for Tom and Hannah. “Where’d Tom and Hannah run off to?” Samantha asked. “They ran off to the beach,” Alizar replied. “Really? I wanna go..” Zayn replied. “We’ll go later,” she smiled back. “Promise?” “Definitely,” she said as he grabbed her hand holding it.

Anna’s POV:

Chapter 5:
“Chris come on, we’ve got to go, everyone’s waiting on us,” I said laughing pushing him away. “Babe,” he pleaded. I gave in and put my arms around him kissing him. “Te Amo Anna,” he smiled hugging me close. “I love you too,” I said. Someone knocked on the door, “Guys you ready?” Marvin said. “Yeah,coming,” I yelled back. “Hurry yeah?” he said and I heard him walk away. “Come on, told you,” I stuck my tongue out at him. “Yeah,yeah,” he smiled as I opened the door walking out and he followed me.  

Hannah’s POV:

Chapter 6:

“Tom it’s really amazing out here, so beautiful,” I said. “mhm,” he replied smiling sitting next to me on the beach. We were sitting towards the edge the water crashing at our feet.  We just sat there watching the beach. “What do you want to do for our 6 month anniversary?” he asked me as the water touched my toes, cool against my skin. “I don’t know, any ideas?” I kept looking ahead. “I’ll come up with something perfect,” as I felt him taking my hand, “Only the best for my girl.” I smiled as he leaned in kissing me. He laid me back in the sand as we kissed his hands running through my hair. This day couldn’t get any more perfect.. “We’ve been looking everywhere for you..” Siva said. “Should of known…”. Reesh laughed. Tom and I looked up to see everyone staring at us. “Ready to go yet guys?” Alizar asked smiling. “Um, yeah, come one Tom,” I blushed. “Yeah babe,” he said pulling me up to him.

MY POV:

Chapter 7:

We all walked up to the boardwalk in our bare feet putting on our shoes when we got to the top. We all went walking into the restaurant called Geon’s Grill. We ate and then went our separate ways wondering down the boardwalk. “Aston lets go over there!” I said pointing to the merry-go round. “Alright,” he laughed taking my hand and we walked towards it. Chris and Anna were walking towards it too. Aston put his arms around me walking behind me as we went to it. “Marina, hey!” Anna yelled at us. We were in line and they were behind a couple people behind us. We waved to them smiling as we got into the cart. The lights were lighting up the boardwalk. It was perfect. “Marina, I’m happy we’re together,” Aston said pulling me close as we went up. I smiled into his chest, “Me too.” He kissed my cheek as we went around and around.

Chapter 8:

Anna’s POV:

Chris and I got into a cart riding up. “Anna, are you okay?” “Scared, I don’t like heights,” I replied. “Awww babe, then why did you get in here with me?” “You wanted to go, I didn’t wanna stand alone down there.” I replied. “It’ll be alright. I’ll protect you,” Chris replied putting his arms around me. I smiled as we rode around in a circle looking at everything.

Alizar’s POV:

“Zayn you won’t get me!” I yelled running down towards the beach. “You can’t run that far babe,” he yelled after me, “I’ll catch you!” I laughed still running as I felt his arms go round me. “Told you,” he pulled me close, “I win.” “You cheated!” I laughed. “No, you’re just a sore loser,” he smiled at me. “Okay, okay, what do you want as your prize then?”I asked. “Come with me, lets go swimming,” he said picking me up and walking us to the edge of the beach where the water met the sand. “Really?” I said as he sat me down. “Yeah, let’s go,” he smiled at me pulling my shirt off and throwing it down. I undid my shorts taking them off s he took off his clothes. “Ready?” he asked picking me back up walking us into the water. “It’s warm,” I said as I held onto him and we swam. “Yeah, it’s nice, just you and me out here,” he replied as we swam close to each other. I looked at him. He had the most beautiful eyes. I could stare at them all day. “What” he laughed. “What? Nothing,” I said playing it off as I splashed him. He splashed me back and we just joked till we saw everyone else walking back to the house.

Chapter 9:

Anna’s POV:

Everyone got back to the house and it was about eleven thirty. “Dancing time,” Alizar yelled turning on her Ipod. Chris pulled me into the living room with everyone else. We were all dancing in a group to Usher. After about thirty minutes me and Chris snuck off into our room. Music was still blasting through the whole house, everyone still dancing. He pulled me into his arms pushing me against the room door. “You’re amazing,” he said holding me close. I smiled looking up at him. He leaned in kissing me. Rockets went off as I put my arms around him. He picked me up wrapping my legs around his waist as we walked back to the bed…

Sam’s POV:

“Where’d Anna and Chris go?” I yelled at Reesh. “They ran off somewhere,” he yelled back over the music. “I think you know where they went,” Keshani laughed. Marvin started laughing too, “Yeah. I bet they did.” Reesh pulled me close singing along to the song playing, “Now get up on over here and get up on this bed..” Jason Derulo’s That’s my Shhh. I wished everyone else would go so just me and him would be together. I took his hand, “Come on.” “Where we going babe?” he asked following me. I pulled him into our room. He walked in behind me. I shut the door locking it. “You know you shouldn’t sing to me like that,” I said. “I’m sorry babe, I thought you liked that song..” he said confused. “I do, and now..” I replied moving to him starting to unbutton his shirt. I smiled at him. “Oh, well, in that case..maybe I should sing to you more often,” he laughed kissing me. His hands running through my hair.

Chapter 10:

Marina’s POV:

Aston, me, Keshani, Hannah, tom, Siva, Marvin and JB stayed in the living room all dancing together. “Mind if I have a dance?” Marvin cut in. “Sure bruv,” Aston said handing me away. Marvin smiled as he took me in his arms. Aston went to the kitchen to get everyone drinks. “Thanks for dancing with me,” he said holding me close. “You’re welcome,” I said as Love Hangover by Jason Derulo came on. Me and Marvin kept dancing until Ast came back. “Babe wow, you looked hot,” he pulled me back to him. I smiled as we heard Hannah and Tom arguing. “We were going to record this song you know,” he trailed off. “Yeah but you didn’t Jason did,” Hannah replied. “Not the point..” Tom laughed. Aston and me started laughing at them.

Keshani’s POV:

Siva had his arms around me, my head on his shoulder as we slow danced to Fallen by Jason Derulo. “Tired yet baby?” he whispered into my ear. I nodded. He smiled picking me up. Everyone said goodnight to us as he carried me to bed. I went to the bathroom changed wearing a huge tshirt. He was wearing boxers as we climbed into bed. “This was a great first day in the US,” he said as put his arms around me. “Yeah,” I nodded. “I love you,” were the last words I heard him say before I drifted to sleep.

Chapter 11:

Hannah’s POV:

I woke up to Tom sleeping on the floor. I looked down at him, he looked so peaceful. I couldn’t figure out why he was on the floor though. He was on the bed when we fell asleep. Maybe he was mad at me…I got up off the bed and went to him. I sat down and nudged him. “Tom,” I whispered. He didn’t move. “Tom! Wake up! Why are you on the floor sleeping?” I nudged him again. “Hmmm…” he yawned. He sat up opening his eyes, “Why am I on the floor?” “ I don’t know. That’s what I was going to ask you,” I replied. “I guess I fell off the bed,” he answered getting up pulling me up with him. “Let’s go to sleep,” he said pulling me onto the bed with him covering us up. “Night babe,” he said his arms around me as we drifted back to sleep.

Marina’s POV:

“You awake?” I heard a voice say. I opened my eyes to see Aston looking at me. “I am now,” I smiled. “Good, I’ve got a surprise for you,” he smiled pulling something out of his pocket. A necklace with a heart locket glistened in the moonlight. “Awww Aston it’s beautiful,” I gasped as he put it around my neck. “I thought you’d like it,” he said hugging me. I pulled him down to me on the bed as he pulled the blanket over us. “I don’t like it I love it.” “Good.” I put my arms around his neck and kissed him.

Chapter 12:

Keshani’s POV:

I woke up in the morning to Siva sleeping next to me. I got up and changed walking into the bedroom when Siva’s arms slipped around me. “Morning Kesh,” he smiled. “Morning, how’d you sleep?” I asked as he walked me back towards the bed. “It’s always a good night when I’m sleeping with you babe,” he said kissing me. I kissed him back, couldn’t believe we were together. That he wanted me. “I love you Siva,” I whispered as he pulled me onto the bed laying down next to me. “I love you. More than you’ll ever know,” he smiled. We were silent for a couple minutes. “I don’t want to get up babe,” Siva looked at me, “I could stay here all day just staring at your beautiful face to be honest.” I looked down then up at him. “That’s so sweet Siva, I wanna stay here with you too.” “Well, then let’s stay. Right here. No getting out of bed.” He pulled me into a hug as I laughed.

Alizar’s POV:

“Alizar…wake up,” I heard a voice say. “No…go away,” I replied pulling the blanket back over my head. “Ali, I’ve got something for you babe, come on,” someone whispered into my ear. I opened my eyes to see Zayn on his knees on the bed, holding something behind his back. “Morning, there’s by baby,” he smiled. I yawned sitting up, “Morning.” He moved the covers so he was underneath them with me. “Look what I’ve got for you,” he moved his hand out in front of me holding a bouquet of roses. “Awwww Zayn, they’re beautiful,” I replied taking them. “I thought so,”  he moved the blanket, “Now time to get up babe, up you go,” he picked me up carrying me out of our room and into the living room while I held my flowers. Almost everyone else was up already in the living room.

~~~***** BANDS/ SINGERS I LIKE~~~~*******

HERES A LIST OF THEM. You should go check them out if you don't know who they are. :D

• All Time Low
• Never Shout Never
• Taylor Swift
• Darin
• Eric Saade
• Varsity Fanclub
• Thomas Fiss
• JLS
• Olly Murs
• Chipmunk
• Chris Brown
• Jay Sean
• McFLY
• The Wanted
• Jesse McCartney
• US5
• Allstar Weekend
• Big Bang
• Chase Coy
• Bruno Mars
• Cody Simpson
• Backstreet Boys (Always! since i was little.)
• Hunter Hayes
• Carter Twins
• David Archuleta
• Busted
• Drew Ryan Scott
• E.M.D
• Ola
• Fefe Dobson
• Eminem
• Frankie J.
• Gloriana
• Joe Jonas
• Jessie James
• K. Drew
• Jimmy Robbins
• Lady Antebellum
• Mario Vazquez
• Marcos Hernandez
• Mayday Parade
• Meg and Dia
• Ne-Yo
• One Call
• Paramore
• We The Kings
• The Ready Set
• Reik
• The Saturdays
• Radio For The People
• Ryan Cabrera
• The Script
• Secondhand Serenade
• Shayne Ward
• Simple Plan
• Sonohra
• Steel Magnolia
• Starboy Nathan
• Stephen Jerzak
• Talay Riley
• Taio Cruz
• The Veronicas
• Stereo Skyline
• Usher
• Tinie Tempah
• Tino Coury
• Valerio Scanu
• Travis Garland
• Terry He
• Weatherstar
• We Should Whisper!
• Artist Vs. Poet

So comment back and tell me some of your fave bands/ if you checked out any of these and liked them <3 :D lets share music! <3 <3

NEW STORY!!!!!!!!!!!

HEY EVERYBODY! THANKS for reading the stories i post on here. I was thinking I'm going to start another one and I want everyone to leave me a comment saying who they want to be in the new story. :D any one from VFC, The Wanted, Olly Murs, Chris Brown, Chipmunk, JLS, Thomas Fiss,The Saturdays,Darin,Eric Saade, Ola, Big Bang whoever... just throwing famous people out there.lol. So it can be a band or one person or a couple people. :D I'll start writing this weekend so you have until then to leave me a comment on here. <3 you lots.xoxoxoxo.lol. Marina